Writing IS like that. You write..you rewrite, rewrite and rewrite until you are satisfied with what your intelligence has to deliver. After that, it is the sub editor's business to do it to his/her heart's content. If the sub editor thinks like you, it is okay. Otherwise, you will always be in two worlds and it will be reflected in the final product.
Dennis Chibi Chunghoo san, you understand editors. Sometimes I feel, editors, are fallen angels. The know both heaven and hell.